100 Word Challengeby Lucy

Posted on February 19, 2012 by 06lucyw

Just as Ben entered the abandoned house, a ghostly voice called out”Its not my fault.”"AHHHHHHHH!!!”Screamed Ron,who was Bens best friend.Ben sneakly creaped through the living room door and stared at the ferocios sight that stood before him. There was freaky looking skeleton proped up in a yellow velvet chair. The head was tilted and the arms were resting on the arms of the chair.Ben slowly backed away from the door trying not to feel like a coward.As soon as he got home there was a sigh of relief sitting on his face.

Report Post As Inappropriate

This entry was posted in 100 Word Challenge and tagged . Bookmark the permalink.

3 Responses to 100 Word Challengeby Lucy

  1. Allison Cullars says:
    February 21, 2012 at 4:25 pm

    My name is Allison Cullars and I am in Edm 310 at the University of South Alabama. This is a great post. It’s amazing how you only used 100 words to tell this experience. I love your descriptions of the skeleton. You really helped the readers picture the experience.

    Report Comment As Inappropriate

  2. Mrs Capper says:
    February 20, 2012 at 2:31 pm

    Well done Lucy, this is a very well written 100 words.

    Report Comment As Inappropriate

  3. Amy Parkin (Team 100WC) says:
    February 19, 2012 at 5:03 pm

    Hello Lucy!

    I enjoyed your 100WC – it was so dramatic! I wonder why the ghostly voice called out “It’s not my fault”?

    I particularly liked your description of the skeleton, with it’s head tilted and it’s arms resting – I could really picture it.

    Well done.

    Amy :)

    Report Comment As Inappropriate